GIS 0510: Developmental Reading and Writing

Computer Lab Activities for Week 11

Welcome to Week 11!

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There are three activities today, which are also next week's assignments. Do them one at a time. Do # 1 below first, print it out, show it to me, then put in the corrections, reprint it, and hand it in to me stapled to your first version. Do the same thing with # 2 and # 3 below. If you finish all three before class is over, and if I say it's OK, you can leave early

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#1. Please edit the following sentences:

a. They goes to school.

b. They walks to school.

c. I seen them girls.

d. I usually use pencils and aren't use to compooter.

e. The story is about how TV hurt a childs mind.

f. Movies take away the childs imagination.

g. Parents thinks that TV are OK because they keep their children out of the way.

h. Again the little man carried out her requested for more gold.

i. Their is no such thing as free lunch.

j. Eventually people will been board and they will read books.

k. Their my relatives.

l. The Dwarf was mad and ripped off his leg and hopped of mad and the Queen never seen him again.

m. Get out of their!

n. I seen him before.

o. The time to act is know.

p. Movies takes away there drive too reads books.

q. Once upon a time, they're was a mill who lived by the mill.

r. Lets go to Jennys house.

s. He walked pass me without admitting my existence.

t. Tells young son been sentenced to death.

u. He to is a nice guy.

v. It seems like their are crazy.

w. this storys main point is this: the greatest thing, youll ever learn, is to love and been love in return.

x. I know this dog never bark

y. At home I have five TV set's.

z. I like dog's, people, star's, and cake.

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Now, print the above corrected a-z sentences and show them to me (or call me to look at them on the screen). After you get my comments, revise and print this part of the assignment.

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# 2. Please make up 13 new sentences. Each sentence should include one of the following words or phrases:

Its, its, they, they are, their, there, now, know, five boys, the girl's nail polish, I've seen, I see, we'll see.

a.

b.

c.

d.

e.

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Now, print the above corrected 14 sentences and show them to me (or call me to look at them on the screen). After you get my comments, revise and print this part of the assignment.

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# 3: Write one paragraph responding to the following Free Press article:

German man found 5 years after he died

November 20, 1998

Reuters

BONN -- A dead German sat in front

of his television set for five years, the

lights on his Christmas tree flashing

beside him, and none of his neighbors

noticed.

"Someone said once that he had gone

off to a home; I didn't ask any more,"

said Monika Majarres, who lived in

the same Hamburg block of flats as

Wolfgang Dircks, a divorced,

disabled loner who died in 1993 at

age 43.

The two neighbors on his floor only

moved in four years ago and had

never seen Dircks, a former toolmaker

who had reportedly threatened to

whip anyone who asked about him.

Other tenants in the 18-flat block

minded their business. Bild

newspaper said on Thursday the dead

man's letter box, which might have

raised an alarm when it overflowed,

had been emptied every now and then,

though no one knows by whom.

The landlords came knocking only

after the bank account from which

Dirck's rent and bills were paid ran

dry.

Beside the broken television set and

the still twinkling tree they found his

skeleton -- his TV listings magazine

still on his lap and open on the page

for Dec. 5, 1993.

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Once you are done writing, showing to me, and re-writing all three assignments above, congratulate yourself on a job well done, sign out, and leave.

Happy Thanksgiving!